additional doo-wop vocals by Yamine Renri, lol
constructive criticism is appreciated, I’m new to the music production scene. how do you like it? is there something i should still be working on? thank you for taking your time to listen 
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Oh man this was really good, I like it quite a lot 
. Good work on the vocals (and I love the Bass in the end it really goes along with that drum pattern).
Keep on making amazing music, and Welcome ^^
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thank you so much! i’m glad you liked it.
Whoa, yeah this is amazing! I think the only critique I could give would be to adjust the volume of some instruments a bit, mainly the hi hats, since it sounds a bit “much” at times? But I don’t know enough about composing to say anything more than that haha
But really, it sounds so professional! You make Eleanor sound very good, and I get a very clear “feeling” from the song. Like, it sounds like you know what you’re doing, and the song is very cool. Great job!
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thank you!! you gave such well thought compliments you put a smile on my face and thanks for the critique too! i fixed the hi-hat volume and even changed the sound. i will probably repost this when i’m 100% happy with it.
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I’m glad! If/when you upload the new version, I hope I’ll be around to hear it!!