This time I added pitchbends to make it sound more natural.
Here’s the unpitched version: https://drive.google.com/file/d/13Tpqqn2sA9qlrGOEdvuGs0MbM1iH9hc2/view?usp=sharing
She’s still super loud and dry compared to the backing track. Less volume, more reverb.
Also try automating tension and breathiness. And play with word lengths. Sometimes sentences sound more natural if the words are slightly off rhythm, or if you remove gaps between some words.
Sounds much better than before, thank you for your creation!
(Translate with translator)
Thanks! I will try better in next covers!
Ganbare your best!