Saki is a Punk Rocker
Thank you for your creation, hope your next work will be better ~
LinR_PN You are the only one, who is willing to say something about this song, so I would like to hear more from you about it.
I listened to the song 100 times and I am biased.
I cannot improve without knowing what is wrong.
LingR_PN isn’t a native English speaker, and I think the phrase wish the next work will be better is likely to be a terrible translation.
It sounds fine to my ears!
The vocal is slightly off pitch and wobbly, exactly as it should be to convince me that it’s an amateur singer and not a robot.
If it is this case, I am sorry and apologise. Not native speaker too.
This is a punk rock, it is supposed to be this way.
Here is the original: PARAN MAUM Boku No Migite english sub - YouTube
I think this song has quite a bit of potential … but staying true to the original song is also an option.