Eleanor Forte AI Lite - Innocence(by regulus)[rock cover]

Theodora_Rose · 2021 年 12 月 13 日午後 12:10

Enjoy!

dcuny · 2021 年 12 月 14 日午前 3:34

Nice! Pleasant melody, and nice backing.

The following lyric isn’t correct English, because it’s missing a word:

I wanna be the [place] where you are
I only wanna be [place] the where you are

This was mentioned to regulus, so I don’t think they’d mind it being corrected. The simplest fix would be to change the to there, which is used in lots of pop songs:

I wanna be there where you are
I only wanna be there where you are

Good job with the cover!

Theodora_Rose · 2021 年 12 月 14 日午後 3:54

Thanks. It didn’t cross my mind to change the lyrics to make grammatical sense in English though.

dcuny · 2021 年 12 月 14 日午後 5:23

Yeah, I can totally see not wanting to rewrite someone else’s song.

MagicalMaybe · 2021 年 12 月 14 日午後 5:33

Well done Theodora. Holds together really well. Love how you end the song with acoustic guitar. Very clear vocals and I can catch every word. I know you put the lyrics in but i could get them anyway.

Theodora_Rose · 2021 年 12 月 14 日午後 7:07

Thank you so much! I’m glad you could understand every word.

LinR_PN · 2021 年 12 月 18 日午後 12:35

Not bad, thanks for your creation ~

Theodora_Rose · 2021 年 12 月 18 日午後 3:35

Thank youuu!