Nice! Pleasant melody, and nice backing.
The following lyric isn’t correct English, because it’s missing a word:
I wanna be the [place] where you are
I only wanna be [place] the where you are
This was mentioned to regulus, so I don’t think they’d mind it being corrected. The simplest fix would be to change the to there, which is used in lots of pop songs:
I wanna be there where you are
I only wanna be there where you are
Good job with the cover!
Thanks. It didn’t cross my mind to change the lyrics to make grammatical sense in English though.
Yeah, I can totally see not wanting to rewrite someone else’s song.
Well done Theodora. Holds together really well. Love how you end the song with acoustic guitar. Very clear vocals and I can catch every word. I know you put the lyrics in but i could get them anyway.
Thank you so much! I’m glad you could understand every word.
Not bad, thanks for your creation ~