I appoint Mai as singer this time. Mai, a digital girl, and Bora, an analog old man, have begun to rhyme in Japanese lyrics as well as steps!
Added several guitar tracks of mine , reflecting the advice received from everyone involved. Part of the drum tracks have also been replaced. I also fixed the inharmony of the song melody.
I think it’s finished in a light 70’s style pop rock. I like the chorus melody myself.
Thanks Bora