I have a song on souncloud where we are three authors of the music and I wrote the text. I wrote there how the song was created and I created it with A.I. singers - is sung by (Kevin, Jun, Asterian and Solaria) and the Chorus is conceived as a choral quartet. I have translated the text for free with the help of DeepL from Czech to English (meaning only - English was not to use for singing). This translation captures the essence of what it’s about quite well and I even used DeepL for free for my next song. For other texts, I will use the already paid translation. I inserted the translated text into English a bit clumsily on twice in the comments on SoudCloud.
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Good morning to you.
It’s a very atmospheric song. It’s Bora’s personal preference, but I also like the deep voice below an octave. I think the female vocals that come over it are also effective. Piano works well too.
Regards
Marc Bora
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Thank you.
I learned to sing that deep voice earlier and Asterian is from this year and it helps me a lot with intonation. I sing deeply to be at least somehow better than my two friends, who will stomp me deep under the ground with their singing. So I sing deep and they surpass me in normal and higher positions. But we are friends with everything. The piano was recorded for me by a great keyboardist friend back in 2008, but I haven’t seen him for a long time. The last time was at the funeral of a friend - a great drummer.
I will show here the translation using DeepL (I will buy paid services from them, it is worth it) to show how I write the lyrics (exceptionally, the text is taken more comprehensively) and I realize that my way of writing the lyrics may not be suitable for a larger number of songs. I take it that I have my handwriting and I envy everyone who can write lyrics more simply, but that’s all the more genius.
Love is just a stream.
You continue to protect - your laughter drenched in tears,
and in your whim, my love, you hide a rose flower!
And I on the thorns of roses - I don’t recognize pride,
so before my fall, I see the world from above!
You give yourself to all, love - in the stream of fear and sin,
I just want to float in it - I’m going somewhere farther!
Suddenly he’s got a current - that salty taste,
in the sea of all foolish dreams - I’m alone in it!
Refr:
Next, I seriously ask, why does love often change currents ?
I’ll feel better if I don’t hear any more!
I’m not supposed to lie to myself and mind my own business,
be quiet for a while and then laugh in the silence!
That love is a game, you tell me - when I only look at it.
I’m just taking a long look - at her from afar!
I dream before the current sweeps me away - and keep singing about it.
Why do I foolishly expect you to praise me for it!
Love is but a mere current - a current of seduction and weak faith.
The enthusiasm in me sometimes - it kind of drifts away !
So unbelief always disturbs my love.
I’m running from the house over the threshold - how fast I’m putting on my shoes!
Refr:
Next, I seriously ask, why does love often change currents ?
I’ll feel better if I don’t hear any more!
I’m not supposed to lie to myself and mind my own business,
be quiet for a while and then laugh in the silence!
Solo: … …
Conclusion:
Love is just a stream - just a stream of light and dark shadows.
Love is just a stream - even of our embarrassed looks.
Love is just a stream where we sometimes find our guilt.
Love is just a current, and by that current - for a while only - I will lead you.
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Omitted original verse: ( guitar solo is used instead )
Love is just a stream - a stream of silence and treacherous words.
It really is just a stream - of treacherous appearances and confessions.
Really, it’s just a stream - of my returns from my wanderings.
Well, really, it’s just a stream - a stream of late repentance.
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