Willing to provide Cover Feedback? (Nayutalien - Alien Alien)

As of late i’ve been working on a cover of Alien Alien using Eleanor Forte, and I am seeking out feedback regarding the pronunciation, sound quality, instrumental, or any other aspect of the song that needs improvement. I feel that no criticism is to harsh and that it’s all part of the improvement process!

Original - Nayutalien
Translation - Forgetfulsubs
Midi - Nord V

Thank you for reading!