More aggressiveness?

I’ve been trying to remake this fan remix, however I’m having a hard time making it sound just right. Belt is already on 150% and I added another vocal track with distortion but it really doesn’t do much. From the demos I’ve seen 9 Zero can’t really do better in regards of raspy voices. Any tips?

My:

Original (at 22 sec.):

「いいね!」 2