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This is lovely, very unusual instrumentation, great balance. Love the stormy section around 2:50.
The only thing I’m not too keen on is that the voice is too breathy; I think it would fit better with a clearer vocal sound, or perhaps start out quiet and breathy and move it to a cleaner sound as it builds?
I’d also prefer the backing vocals to be more spread out (use a spreader or a very short delay and a bit more reverb on them?); they are too dry and too close to the lead vocal.
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Thank you so much for listening and for your comments. Very useful feedback on the vocals.
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